Comparing BLOGS

I chose to compare two blogs about the DALLAS COWBOYS video score board because at my house we bleed silver and blue.

The first site CyberTheater does not do a very good job of using the tips for writing because it is just a short summary of what the NFL stated. There is really no details and it is just one paragraph all ran together and there is nothing to make it stand out. The only nice thing about this blog is that it contains a video showing what happened with the video bored.

The Second site TechDare does a better job at making there blog easy to read and eye catching. Though it is still just one paragraph it does a better job of have different colored words and a bold heading. It also has a picture that links to the NFL page with a full story of what happened.

I do think that the writing style would impact if readers come back to these blogs. The CyberTheater blog is not something I would go back to because it is just a messy site and there is really not a much of a writers voice just straight forward facts.

The Tech Dare blog adds a little extra to there blog making it more interesting to read and with it linking out to the NFL page if I wanted to know more I check it out with ease.

ME AGAIN!!!

My name is Kassie but I go by KC, and one day when I am working as a photographer that will be my symbol.

I am from a small town in TEXAS, growing up there we called it GRAHAM, AMERICA OR G-TOWN. Because it is a sheltered town in its own little world, where everybody knows who you, your parents and your siblings are.

That town has the best food, I make special trips back just for some CHICKEN EXPRESS AND VETONI'S. There is also a DRIVE- IN THEATER which is amazing since so few are still working.

When I was a senior in High School I started working at WAL-MART because there is not much else but fast food. This is my 4th year at Wal- Mart and my 3rd year in the PHOTO LAB, I have always liked my job until here lately.

WAL-MART has gone to this stupid score card scheduling that is computer generated, LIKE A COMPUTER REALLY KNOWS WHEN WE ARE GOING TO BE BUSY!!! They have taken all the personal stuff out of the schedule .

The computer does not care if you get out of school at 12:50 you have to be at work by 1:00, or if you would like to be off before midnight because you have school the next morning and need to study for a test.

I am suppose to be working FULL TIME but they have cut everybodys hours and I am getting PART TIME hours. They are trying to make less people do the same job and in a shorter amount of time.

I made it through the first week back at school and between my school and work schedule I am always GOING, I have decieded that this Semester will be CRAZY but I will make it one day at a time.

Me

My name is Kassie but I go by KC and one day when I am taking great pictures and signing my name at the bottom that will be my symbol. I from small town Graham, America or G-town!!! I love that little town we actual have good food to eat there, like Chicken Express and Amazing Sweet Tea. I work in the Walmart Photo Lab I have been with Walmart for 4 years and always liked my job... until recently. They have changed up the way they do things and we are on stupid score card scheduling I now work short shifts on the weekends and go start from school to work on weekdays. I am a full time employee bearly getting part time hours, they are trying to make less people with less hours do the same job as before all this went down. My life is crazy but I make it one day at time....